Saturday, September 20, 2008

What Was I Thinking? "Monday I Wandered"

Because we are alone
I can relate to old things.
Unwanted like China
in a shop window.
I can relate to old things
gathering dust
in a shop window.
We are warmed by the late sun.
Gathering dust,
the old man fails to avoid my eye.
We are warmed by the late sun
though we don't smile.
The old man fails to avoid my eye.
Unwanted like China
though, we don't smile
because we are alone.
This is a "pantoum". The rule is a pattern of line repetitions. Let each line be 1,2,3,4 in the first stanza. The second stanza will begin with line 2 and then a new line (5) is followed by line 4, then another new line (6). Next stanza will begin with line five. The end of the poem uses the first and third line of the poem but it flips, so use the first line last. Send them to me if you like.

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